(1) UN, Chicago or APA format is not our primary concern. Don’t worry about it. (2) Your report should not be longer than 0ne page. (3) No need for abstract. One page itself is a kind of abstract. (3) You have presented too many details. Most of them repeat the information in the case. (4) Your expression is based on storytelling. It’s very similar to the language of the authors of the case. Use an evaluative or commentary style. (5) Try to address significant components of instructional design (need, audience, strategy etc.) rather than summarizing the case. (6) You don’t have to discuss the case theoretically unless there is a strong link. (7) No need for references because this is not an article. We are more interested in your perception of the case. (8) Focus more on the rationale and appropriateness of the choices/preferences of the design team.
***** do not use such professional words as I am not a native speaker.
Please consider that my previous submission wasn’t very good as he stated and this one gonna be better not all of a sudden professional or it will raise a red flag for him and his curiosity about the legitimacy of my assignment.